literature

The Pain of You

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What will it take
For you to see
The pain
That you're causing me?

What will clear your eyes
So you can see
The scars on my heart
That you have made
With your own hand?

Now i'm just sitting here
Lonely and confused
Scared and empty

I need a comforting touch
To help me up
And to lead me back
To my pathway.

I'm waiting
But how long
Will I have to continue
This wait?

This
Is the pain
Of you
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Necrossis's avatar
I surely don't think this poem is sucky! :aww:
It's really touching, especially if the reader is feeling atleast half as heart-broken/miserable/sad/... as you're describing it in the poem.

Personally, I think you did a great job. The description of the whole situation is amazing.