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Admitting, Is The First Step

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"Maka?"
"Yes, Soul?" I asked.
We were on our way to the Acdemy. He stoped and turned half way.
"Do you like me?" He asked, worry colouring his voice. I raised my eyebrow before answering.
"No, I live in an apartment with you, because I hate you." The sarcsme in my voice was thick, almost tangible. He frowned, his brow knitting together.
"That's not what I ment". The frustration greatly evident.
I stoped walking, "Oh?" My voice quavering some.
"And what did you mean, Soul?" I whispered. It would be just like him to make a joke of this. I let my eyes wonder around the alley way, looking for Black*Star with a camcorder. If he was there, I couldn't find him.

Soul sighed and leaned against the alley wall, muttering what souded like "Stupid girls."
I squeezed my boooks, restraining from giving him a good Maka-Chop. I kept silent though, waiting for him to continue.
He avoided my gaze momentarily, letting his eyes wonder.
"Maka," He began, "I like you. More then is cool to say out loud." He took his hands out of his jacket pockets and started to fiddle with his thumbs.
"And, I guess what I'm trying to ask you, is...do you feel the same?" He gave me a small, timid, very un-Soul-like smile. He must be telling the truth, I thought, the shock sinking in slowly, He's neverous I reasoned.

I just stood there, dumbstruck.
"Wha...Ar...Are you, serious?" I stammered.
He lifted himslef off the wall and walked towards me, his face inches from mine.
"Yea Maka. I am." He breathed.
I closed the short distanced between our lips.

For a too-short moment, I was filled with utter bliss. We pulled apart. Why do I have to have air to live? I Complained internally.
"I like you too, Soul." I whispered into his ear.
He smiled his typical Soul-smile, bering his unusally sharp teeth.
"Cool." He said simply.
He laced his fingers through mine, and we continued towards the Academy.
So this is my first real Fan fic. Let me know if it's worth my efforts to write a couple more installments. Thanks!
By the way, I do NOT own any Soul Eater character!! Only the plot is my own.
Comment please!!!!
EDIT: Yay! I fixed it! no more crazy slashs for thoughts!
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SammiPie1247's avatar
Fangirl Squeel Emoticon I loved this! Hope more to come! :3